Poet's Corner

BUBBADOG14 wrote: Time

I always enjoyed being busy,
Loved getting gratification from my boss,
The feeling I got when my alarm went off in the morning
knowing where I was going.

But this evil thing took that away with the swipe of a hand
Leaving me with this dark tunnel
not knowing where I'm going
And now I have only time.




This is my 1st time at writing Poetry, not sure if it's correct, just came out of me!

It really flows and is obviously from the heart - that's what poetry is about - I think it's fantastic and very poignant. Big pat on the back.

shygirl15 wrote:

BUBBADOG14 wrote: Time

I always enjoyed being busy,
Loved getting gratification from my boss,
The feeling I got when my alarm went off in the morning
knowing where I was going.

But this evil thing took that away with the swipe of a hand
Leaving me with this dark tunnel
not knowing where I'm going
And now I have only time.




This is my 1st time at writing Poetry, not sure if it's correct, just came out of me!

It really flows and is obviously from the heart - that's what poetry is about - I think it's fantastic and very poignant. Big pat on the back.

:blush: Thank you.

Pain

Pain fills your whole body.
Pain fills your mind.
It squeezes out all other thoughts,
And takes over your life

IF YOU LET IT

Fight it.
Banish it.
Stand up to it.

P ain
A gony
I rritation
N euralgia

Shout out "Be gone!"
And it is so.

There was a young boy called Neddy,
Who was so in love with his teddy.
He hugged him and stroked him,
Then tugged him and choked him,
Now he's all alone in his beddy!!


Yes - I know it's awful , but can you do better? :blush:

There was a girl called Joy
who lost her favourite toy
She searched high, she searched low
with no luck she let go
now her toys are weighted.

BUBBADOG14 wrote: There was a girl called Joy
who lost her favourite toy
She searched high, she searched low
with no luck she let go
now her toys are weighted.

Okay so you're definitely better than me at this malarkey lol Good one Bubba

Why am I lonely,
why does it cut like a knife,
I don't want to be phoney,
when I have so much in my life.
But thoughts cause confusion,
they race through my head,
are they just an illusion,
while in pain on my bed.

Sorry if the above is a bit dismal, just came out that way! x

Grandma7 wrote: Sorry if the above is a bit dismal, just came out that way! x

Poems are a good way of expressing yourself, so don't feel bad, just let them flow!

Flu

Flu sneaks up on you in the dead of night
and raps it's self around your body
Only do you realise when you wake
that your in for a horrible faight.

Your poor bones ache
your head so foggy it's like when, where who!
Your really in a mess you don't know what to do
As for your nose! it can't decided whether to run or bung up
All you can do lie on the settee and give in to flu
Wait till it's had enough of you, until then your just out of luck!


By BUBBADOG14 & flu!

Great poem, I know how it feels too!

Grandma7 wrote: Great poem, I know how it feels too!

Are you down with this flu bug too then? :sick: