Witty Ditty

tonypark wrote:

Dorrie wrote:

Married men are a funny breed, some stay faithfully all their life
Some like to stray and play,and cause strife for their wife.
So remember all you single girls,if someone's man you try to borrow.
It may bring you a moments joy,but could bring lots of sorrow.
You may tempt him into bed,and yes he may stay all night.
But in the cold light of morning,he will go home to his wife.
So if any of you pretty young things want to stay and play.
Make sure he's free to do so, or send him on his way.:whistle:

:lol:<br><br>Post edited by: Dorrie, at: 2009/02/08 09:28

Not one of your better ones Dorrie xxxx :whistle:

You mean you dont like it Mr. Park,I thought it was true to life.

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

Dorrie wrote:

Married men are a funny breed, some stay faithfully all their life
Some like to stray and play,and cause strife for their wife.
So remember all you single girls,if someone's man you try to borrow.
It may bring you a moments joy,but could bring lots of sorrow.
You may tempt him into bed,and yes he may stay all night.
But in the cold light of morning,he will go home to his wife.
So if any of you pretty young things want to stay and play.
Make sure he's free to do so, or send him on his way.:whistle:

:lol:<br><br>Post edited by: Dorrie, at: 2009/02/08 09:28

Not one of your better ones Dorrie xxxx :whistle:

You mean you dont like it Mr. Park,I thought it was true to life.

True to Whos life one might ask...not one I recognise..No it doesnt Scan as well as your previouse noble efforts....xxxx lol
One thing worth noting on the content part though..I know of more married females having affairs with single men than the other way xxxx :whistle: :whistle:

AHHHHHHHHHH Mr Park it was'nt the Ditty ,it was the content that pricked your male ego:P :whistle:

Liked or not you are rarely wrong our lovely dorrie. Outstanding as always hunni lol. Go get in the fridge tony hee hee hee:laugh: :laugh: :laugh:

Dorrie wrote:

AHHHHHHHHHH Mr Park it was'nt the Ditty ,it was the content that pricked your male ego:P :whistle:

No....let me draw your attention to the rhyming eliment of your Ditty...Now please sit down as this might be reviewed as critical suggestion...IT DOESNT RHYME xxxx lol;) :whistle:

tonypark wrote:

Dorrie wrote:

AHHHHHHHHHH Mr Park it was'nt the Ditty ,it was the content that pricked your male ego:P :whistle:

No....let me draw your attention to the rhyming eliment of your Ditty...Now please sit down as this might be reviewed as critical suggestion...IT DOESNT RHYME xxxx lol;) :whistle:

Perhaps you would like to do something similar and show me where I am going wrong. :blink:

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

Dorrie wrote:

AHHHHHHHHHH Mr Park it was'nt the Ditty ,it was the content that pricked your male ego:P :whistle:

No....let me draw your attention to the rhyming eliment of your Ditty...Now please sit down as this might be reviewed as critical suggestion...IT DOESNT RHYME xxxx lol;) :whistle:

Perhaps you would like to do something similar and show me where I am going wrong. :blink:

I shall try...but even with a lot of effort..I dont think I can Rhym that badly....Ive a perfect ear you see xxxx :whistle: :whistle:

There was a dear Lady in Time,
Who didnt know how to Rhym,
She tried very hard,
In front room anfd Yard,
But couldnt get the last bit right xxxx :whistle:

tonypark wrote:

There was a dear Lady in Time,
Who didnt know how to Rhym,
She tried very hard,
In front room anfd Yard,
But couldnt get the last bit right xxxx :whistle:

Ok clever dick,redo my effort and make it rhyme.I have throw down the gauntlet,lets see if you are man enough to pick it up:angry: :evil:

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

There was a dear Lady in Time,
Who didnt know how to Rhym,
She tried very hard,
In front room anfd Yard,
But couldnt get the last bit right xxxx :whistle:

Ok clever dick,redo my effort and make it rhyme.I have throw down the gauntlet,lets see if you are man enough to pick it up:angry: :evil:

I shall give it due consideration...throw a few sugar lumps at it ...and improve it beyond recognition xxxx :whistle: Shelly Who ????

tonypark wrote:

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

There was a dear Lady in Time,
Who didnt know how to Rhym,
She tried very hard,
In front room anfd Yard,
But couldnt get the last bit right xxxx :whistle:

Ok clever dick,redo my effort and make it rhyme.I have throw down the gauntlet,lets see if you are man enough to pick it up:angry: :evil:

I shall give it due consideration...throw a few sugar lumps at it ...and improve it beyond recognition xxxx :whistle: Shelly Who ????

We shall see,but remember I stand by the content,though the end was not good,so lets see what you can do with it.

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

Dorrie wrote:

tonypark wrote:

There was a dear Lady in Time,
Who didnt know how to Rhym,
She tried very hard,
In front room anfd Yard,
But couldnt get the last bit right xxxx :whistle:

Ok clever dick,redo my effort and make it rhyme.I have throw down the gauntlet,lets see if you are man enough to pick it up:angry: :evil:

I shall give it due consideration...throw a few sugar lumps at it ...and improve it beyond recognition xxxx :whistle: Shelly Who ????

We shall see,but remember I stand by the content,though the end was not good,so lets see what you can do with it.

Stand by Your content if you so wish...all be it a muddled and sexist thing to stand by....and after Ive been Inspired I shall make efforts to Scan your Ditty xxxx :whistle: :silly: